1. I would say I did somewhat fix my weaknesses from the first free wrote. In the first one I wrote how I need to add more to my conclusion and the paragraph prior to the conclusion, and I did that. I also wrote down that I thought I just repeated myself over and over again just in different ways. I don’t think I actually did that, it may have just seemed like that because it was my writing and or because we were just talking about Hallward and Yoshino over and over again. As for the weaknesses of my final draft, I think there are a lot. Maddee looked over it late last night and helped me edit it a little more but there was so much to fix we just didn’t have time. I would have shown her, or anyone really. I would have shown someone sooner if I knew it wasn’t that good. I learned at one in the morning last night what a claim sentence was so that was really cool.
2. I have never really done peer review before so it was an new thing for me. I will be honest I really don’t like peer review. It’s the fact that people are reading and editing my work, it’s the fact that I have to do that to other peoples work. I’m not afraid to give someone a negative comment or give them advice, I just don’t really know how to do it. It was very challenging for me to try and write things down that wasn’t “oh that part was really good.” Or “nice job.” I tried my best and hopefully my notes were helpful.